Yes, I know that it's been nearly a week since I last put up new chapters. But, as you can see, I have not abandoned the project! I have just posted two new chapters and up dated 2, (i think 8...), and 13. what were the changes?
2: I put the key on the table, instead of in coat pocket.
8(?): She grabs the key
13: made it obvious (I hope) that they are now out of the Sandy-ashen desert.

And I am already working on chapter 16! I was right about one thing: this is coming to me easily now!

Again, tell me what you think of it!