I storm my way to the other room, where everyone else is. "Ok,
Salandra, you are staying here with Mr. Dodo. Everyone else, come with
me." They stare at me. "NOW! There isn't ANY time to waste! We HAVE
to save Hatter!"
"But what are
we supposed to do?" the Tweedles ask.
"Chess, where
is the Vorpol Sword?" March Hare's eyes go wide.
"The Vorpol
Sword is-" March hare starts.
"In the city's
gates," Chess says, interrupting.
"Yes, March
Hare. For the Jabberwalk. And for the Jabberwalk only."
"The
Jabberwalk?" Tweedles say in fright and disbelief.
"Yes. The
Jabberwalk. You are only going to help me find the Vorpol Sword. And to guide
me, whatever Mr. Dodo meant by that."
"Then it must
be so," Dum says.
"If Mr. Dodo
said it, then it must be!" Dee repeats.
"Standing here
is wasting time." I look up at the Cat. "So is floating." We
leave the March Hare's house. Why can't Mr. Dodo help? Why must Salandra stay
behind? We go a different way than
normal. We don't follow the pebble path to the woods. Instead, we go to the
right of the path, the direction of Trea's house. Why is the Vorpol Sword in
the opposite direction of where the Wind took Trea? ARGH!!! Nothing is simply
done anymore! One more proof that I'm not making this up. Why am I still proving
to myself that this isn't a dream or pretend? What is wrong with me? I reach up
and put my hand on my head from frustration. I feel the hat instead of hair. I
take it off and look at it. Green ribbon... red flowers... Trea’s eyes...
Trea's hair... I put the hat back on, the fire within re-kindled. I will save
you, Trea. I promise it.
"Chess, since
you know where the Vorpol Sword is, tell me. What does it look like?" I
ask.
"Knowing where
something is and having actually seen it are two very different things,"
he replies, sounding as bored as ever.
"Well, then,
HAVE you seen it?"
"No, I'm
afraid I have not."
"Tweedles,
have either of you seen it before?"
"If I had,
then he did," Dum says.
"If I hadn't,
the he didn't," Dee replies.
"I didn't, so
Tweedledee hasn't."
"And I didn't,
so we hadn't."
"Hadn't seen
it, no how!" Dum says with finality.
"Alright,
then," I say. "That leaves you, March Hare. Have you seen the Vorpol
Sword before?"
"No, but it
has been said by many, that one would know it as soon as you set eyes on
it," March Hare replies.
"I take that
to mean that it doesn't look like another sword in existence, then."
"That would be
correct."
"Hmm... what
would that special uniqueness be...?" I ask, more to myself than the
group. We fall silent for a while, each consumed in our own thoughts. What was
that poem in Lewis Carroll’s book that had to do with the Vorpol Sword? Oh,
yes, I remember it now.
"
’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did
gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy
were the borogoves
And the
mome raths outgrabe. "
I say. The Tweedles shout out in tandem as I say:
"
’Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
"
The boys are silent as Chess and I take the next:
" The jaws that bite, the claws that
catch! "
March Hare cries out with me:
"
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
The
frumious Bandersnatch!’ "
I, alone, take the next:
" He
took his Vorpol sword in hand:
Long time the manxome foe he sought–
So rested
he by the Tumtum tree,
And
stood awhile in thought.
And as in
uffish thought he stood, "
Chess again joins me:
"
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
Came
whiffling through the tulgey wood,
And
burbled as it came! "
Tweedles chant the next line:
"
One, two! One, two! And through and through "
I take this part alone:
"
The Vorpol blade went snicker-snack!
He left
it dead, and with its head
He went
galumphing back. "
I remain silent as March Hare takes the next:
"
’And has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy! "
Everyone else besides me joins in the final part:
" O
frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!’
He
chortled in his joy.
’Twas
brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre
and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy
were the borogoves,
And the
mome raths outgrabe. "
A few more moments of
silence ensues. I did not realize the poem was a common one. Of course, I never
realized that Dimmerland existed before I came. I always thought that it was
just a children’s tale and nothing more. The thought frightens me. This means
the Jabberwalk is real. Of course it is. Didn't Mr. Dodo say so himself that I
must deal it the death blow? We come upon a wall. A large, brick wall.
"Alright, Chess, you got us this far. Now where is it hidden?" I ask.
"This
way," he says, floating on his way. He must find it slow going to have to
keep a slow pace so that we may catch up with him. The mere realization of this
is almost enough to make me laugh! I suppress it due to the emergency that we
are in. After all, my Hatter, as Mr. Dodo said, needs me. And I need to rescue
him. But I can't do it without help. "Here it is," Chess says,
gesturing to the brick wall. I cock my head in thought. The wall? In the wall?
Behind the wall? Below it? On it?
"Chess, take a
look on the other side. Do you see it there?"
"No..."
he again says in his tired voice. "It is not there."
"How about on
top of the Wall?"
"No... It is
not there either." I again cock my head. The Vorpol sword MUST be
underneath the wall, then. There is no other rational explanation.
"Tweedles, I
need you to start digging under the wall. We need to find that sword!"
"Yes,
Alyssa!" they reply in unison. While they are digging, I search for signs
of the mysterious sword. I walk up and down the wall, turning my head this way
and that. Perhaps I am looking for the wrong shape, wrong idea.
Uh!!! It's so
obvious! I feel like an idiot for not noticing it before. I go back to the
digging site. "Stop digging for a moment. I have an idea." Something
as important as the Vorpol Sword would never be left uncovered. And they
wouldn't put it in a bag or a box. Nor would they simply bury it. Nor would
they merely have it as part of a structure, in this case, the wall. It would be
IN a rock. An unusually long one. And it would both be part of the wall and buried
under the ground. That would ensure its complete safety! I crawl into the dig
site the boys created- they did some pretty good damage, too- and I look at the
lower part of the wall. I see a promising 'rock'. It has a couple of dents in
it, forming a ledge... almost like a... handle of sorts... I pull the ledge.
Wind pulls at my shirt. I look briefly at my shirt and realize that I still
have my pajamas on from early this morning. I need to change. Shaking this
thought from my head, I look up from my shirt to the 'rock'. It is hollow. And
is far bigger than a rock, by any means. Especially for one that is supposed to
be a part of a wall... I climb inside it with little thought. My shoulders are cramped. If I can get my
shoulders through this hole in the wall, I can make it in. I'm hyperventilating.
I hate tight spaces. "Are you alright, Alyssa?" I think March Hare
said that.
"I'm
fine!" I lie. "But, I could use a little bit of help here. Do you
mind pushing my feet?" I stiffen my legs. I wait in anticipation of the
push. Pressure on both feet. I bite my tongue as the walls bite into my
shoulders. I should have had the boys go through instead. Or Chess. Why am I so
impulsive? I give out a scream a land on my stomach.
"Alyssa!"
I hear, in stereo. The boys said that, I'm sure. "Are you alright?"
"Yes!" I
hear whispering above me.
"Is she
alright?"
"If she is,
then she might be-"
"But if she
ain't, then she isn't-" I suppress a giggle and shake my head. Those two
boys and the way they carry on... I shake my head again. I can't see a thing.
"March Hare,
do you have a light?" I call out from the hole.
"I think so.
Just a moment," March Hare answers.
"Sir, with all
due respect, we don't have time here!"
"Here you go,
Alyssa." and a lamp falls down, fully lit. That's right. They probably
don't have flash lights here. The lamp lights up the whole room. In the far
back, is a box. THE box. It is encased in gold. I look it over and marvel at
the encasement. The decorations are so intricate... I push the thoughts aside.
I must save Trea. I can only do that if I get the Vorpol Sword and 'deal the
death blow' to the Jabberwalk. On the side of the box facing the wall, I see a
latch with a lock on it. Oh, please. Please let it work anyways. Please don't
make us have to go somewhere else for the stupid key. I pull on the lock. Once.
Twice. Three times. Nada. GRRR! I search the chamber. There are desks. And
shelves-
"Did you find
it?" March Hare asks. -And drawers. What on earth is this chamber for?! I
notice a little chest, embellished in bronze and silver, sitting under a chair.
I open the chest. Inside, is a key. Masterfully done, too. Grabbing it, I go
over to the large gold box. The lock opens easily. Finally, I open the box.
And, lo-n-behold: the Vorpol Sword, in all of its dangerous glory.
So did Alyssa crawl through a rock in the wall to a chamber underground or through to the other side of the wall? Just trying to make sure I understand. Wouldn't Alyssa be more intrigued as to why everyone knows the poem so well? Also, why wouldn't the key to the chest containing the sword be kept somewhere else? Makes for more adventure.
ReplyDeleteKeep going :)
Yes, she crawled through a rock in the wall to an underground chamber. I hope that I made that clear enough in the book...
DeleteI don't think so, because it was in the original Lewis Caroll's book. And if Alice is real, I don't think it should surprise her that the poem happened to be real. Some things Alice got wrong. But some things she actually remembers quite clearly. Does this make sense? I hope so...
And I agree, the key probably should have been kept somewhere else. But I also wasn't too sure how far I could take the adventure without making Trea's death immanent. I didn't want to push the boundaries too far. But no worries. Adventure will continue. Chapter eight will introduce that next step for adventure.